Placement Matters
Posted by cbgaines on July 29, 2009 · Leave a Comment
Poor sentence construction can confuse or, worse, mislead your reader. This happens often in cause-and-effect statements, where sloppy ordering of multiple effects can blur or change your meaning. MISLEADING: City Council passed the measure, which led to the removal of graffiti and safer streets. [Why are we removing safer streets?] ON THE MONEY: City Council … Read more
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