One Must Follow Another

When combining thoughts in a sentence, stop and consider: do they go together?

THEY DON’T FOLLOW: If you don’t mind splurging, each dish tastes homemade.

What does one’s mind-set about spending money have to do with how food tastes?

BUT THIS MAKES SENSE: Each dish tastes homemade and is worth the considerable expense.

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