Write It Once

Don’t repeat an idea within a sentence. If a single word conveys something, there’s no need to also insert a phrase that acts as a redundancy or overly apparent definition.

NO KIDDING: There are requirements that must be met to work directly with the major casinos.
BETTER: There are requirements for working directly with the major casinos.

Your readers know that a requirement is a necessary condition. The words that must be met serve as needless amplifiers of requirement.

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